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PostSubject: Zor Character Application   Sat Aug 06, 2016 7:53 pm

Steam Name: ELJosh
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:3561683
Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561197967389095/
Age: 15
RP Experience: Played over 300 hours of Military RP, Star Wars RP, and Fallout RP
Cool Mass Effect Fact: Mark Meer (Male Shepard) Also does the voices for the Vorcha

Character Name: Zor "Phalanx" Ken
Character Race: Drell
Why did you choose this race?: I have a fascination with Drell. Thane in ME2 got me liking them and I think it would be very interesting to play as one
Age: 27
Ship Role: Mechanic/Muscle
Equipment: HAZE Medium Assault Armor, M-55 Argus Assault Rifle
Moral Alignment: Neutral Evil
Strengths: Friendly if you can get on his good side. Good with a gun. Good at repairing anything mechanical.
Weaknesses: Bad temper if provoked. Emotions sometimes distract him from a job.

Growing up, Zor was very lonely. His father was in the Drell military and his mother was a mechanic. Zor's father being away made it difficult for his mother not to be depressed. Zor's mother would use fixing things as a passtime while her husband was away. Zor asked his mother one day if she could teach him how to fix his omni-tool. His mother said yes and they spent the next few days repairing it. This opened up new possibilities for him as he got older and started finding new things to tinker with. He dug through closets and garbage bins to try to find anything to repair and restore. He found anything from old FENRIS mechs to Lancer Assault rifles. Years were passing and he grew older. One day he was fixing up one of his broken LOKI Home Defense Mechs, and suddenly 3 Blue Sun Turians blew his door open and started demanding everyone on the ground. Zor and his mother did as they asked and thought everything would be okay, they were just looking for their money. His mother shown something in her holster. She winked at Zor, then jumped up and started shooting. Zor closed his eyes. He heard two thuds as soon as the gun fire stopped. He slowly opened his eyes. He saw 2 dead Turians on the ground, but the third had a knife in his mothers chest. The Turian muttered under his breath "Dumbass lady". Zor was only 20 when this happened, and he swore to it that anyone who wronged him, would die. He was digging a grave for his mother when he got a message reading "Mr. Ken, we regret to inform you that your father was killed in the line of fire 3 hours ago. We will be sending his belongings back to your home." Zor had lost everything. He got down on his knees, and didn't move. He stayed there for nearly an hour before getting up, and walking back home. The next week he received his fathers belongings. It consisted of his fathers Drell Military Issued HAZE Assault armor and his M-55 Argus. He tried on the armor, and he doesn't know how, but it fit like a glove. Then he tested out the rifle. His aim wasn't great but he saw to it that he would practice everyday to ensure that nothing bad would happen to anyone else he cared for. He fixed up his jumpship and set his navigation console for the Citadel. He settles in and finds a hotel to stay for a while. The next day he is approached by a man saying that he wants an able body on his ship, the Geisha. He said it was a transport ship for red sand. Zor was hesitant at first, but then gladly accepted as he weighed out the pro's and con's

(If there is anything here you would like me to work on please let me know Very Happy thank you)


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PostSubject: Re: Zor Character Application   Sat Aug 06, 2016 8:49 pm

How did Zor transist from the citadel to the Geisha(current location)?
Looks alright so far though
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PostSubject: Re: Zor Character Application   Sat Aug 06, 2016 8:54 pm

I was thinking that when he gets picked up by a crew willing to take him in and that is when it happens Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Zor Character Application   Sat Aug 06, 2016 9:22 pm

That's good enough for a +support, methinks.
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PostSubject: Re: Zor Character Application   Sat Aug 06, 2016 9:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Zor Character Application   Sat Aug 06, 2016 10:50 pm

Only complaint is the transition between the Citadel and the Geisha like Ghandi said, other than that I think it looks pretty good. +support
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