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 My first time ME RPing...Don't rape me with your elitist insults, nerds. App.

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Banya

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PostSubject: My first time ME RPing...Don't rape me with your elitist insults, nerds. App.   Tue Jul 12, 2016 2:28 pm

Steam Name: Burn down CVS, he dindu nuffin!
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:58350687
Steam Profile Link: http://steamcommunity.com/id/TheGasmeister/
Age: 29
Rp Experience: 2 Years.
How did you stumble upon our server?: Kulzcow and a bunch of other kids told me about it, and I was like yeah, I'm tired of When Chromosomes Collide
Tell me a cool Mass Effect Fact: The species of 'Vorcha' exist.

Character Name: Du'lath 'Deks' for short.
Character Race: Vorcha
Why did you choose this race?: Because this wasn't a race that didn't make me regret coming here. (Exempting Krogans) Turians, Quarians and every other race are stupid and boring. :^)
Age: 11
What can your character do for our ship? (Muscle, Maintenance, Triggerman, Comedic Act, etc.): Triggerman, Muscle, Retard.
Character Equipment: Graal Spike Thrower, M-6 Carnifex, A Grenade Bandolier and some good old Blood Pack painted BDSM gear/operator gear
Moral Alignment: (See Chart) Neutral Evil
Strengths: Agile af, Literally a walking adapter.
Weaknesses: Bloodrage, Retard.
Character Backstory a.ka. how or why are you here (One paragraph minimum, be creative!):
The planet of Wrill, Du'lath makes his wages as a a security guard for the Krogan mineral monopoly. Participating in Gang wars was a natural pass time of Du'lath considering he wished to be a successful pianist and singer but he had the vocal chords and English lessons of a retarded human newborn. How he became a blood pack mercenary was entirely or somewhat intentional because of his masochist fetish of being beaten to a pulp by big..strong..Krogans but he likes female Vorcha though. His time in the Blood Pack really gave him a lot of shit to do as he continuously just listened to primitive humans bashing on mammoth skin drums which is his favorite genre of music. Du'lath earned Deks as a short because his old partner, Weyrloc Krag couldn't pronounce it and Deks almost sounds like 'Dicks'.
Deks got onto the Pirate via payment and volunteer because Krag basically abandoned Deks for a trio of Krogan females and a shit load of minerals for his back hump.
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PostSubject: Re: My first time ME RPing...Don't rape me with your elitist insults, nerds. App.   Wed Jul 13, 2016 12:49 am

1: That's not really a reason to choose a race. 2: Retard isn't a valuable asset. 3: This App is fucked sideways.

Just my perspective~<3
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PostSubject: Re: My first time ME RPing...Don't rape me with your elitist insults, nerds. App.   Wed Jul 13, 2016 6:14 pm

I'm sorry, I...

There are too many problems with this app for me to even consider accepting it.


Banya wrote:
Character Equipment: Graal Spike Thrower, M-6 Carnifex, A Grenade Bandolier and some good old Blood Pack painted BDSM gear/operator gear

I mean...why did you feel the need to include BDSM gear in your app?  Our server, while tolerant, does not allow ERP on-site.  Be aware of that.  I'm not saying you can't have BDSM gear, but it doesn't make a very good first impression on mods and admins.

Banya wrote:
Strengths: Agile af, Literally a walking adapter.
Weaknesses: Bloodrage, Retard.

Can you go into a bit more detail on these?  And can you add a few more, perhaps?  What do you mean that he is a literal walking adapter?  Is he handy?  

I do apologize, but "retard" is not a very good weakness as the term is far too generic.  It can mean too many different things ranging from medical retardation to outright stupidity to an IQ of 1.3.

Also consider that, if this character is going to encounter combat situations, that he should have some physical weaknesses to complement his agility.

And now onto my biggest gripe.


Banya wrote:
Participating in Gang wars was a natural pass time of Du'lath considering he wished to be a successful pianist and singer but he had the vocal chords and English lessons of a retarded human newborn.

This sentence doesn't make any sense, even in the sarcastic sense.  If he wanted to be a singer why was he in a gang?  How do the two connect?

Banya wrote:
How he became a blood pack mercenary was entirely or somewhat intentional because of his masochist fetish of being beaten to a pulp by big..strong..Krogans but he likes female Vorcha though.

Yet another overt reference to sexual topics.  Again, we are tolerant, but outright ERP is not allowed on the server.  I apologize if I have misunderstood but this should make it clear how your app is coming across to me as an admin that I've had to mention this criticism twice now.

For now, this app is DENIED.  If you need more feedback feel free to contact anyone on the admin team--Arglack, Humpy,  Filters or myself.
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PostSubject: Re: My first time ME RPing...Don't rape me with your elitist insults, nerds. App.   Thu Jul 14, 2016 2:34 am

>tfw I've been waiting a whole day for someone to give me an answer on my second application.

>this was entirely a joke.

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PostSubject: Re: My first time ME RPing...Don't rape me with your elitist insults, nerds. App.   Thu Jul 14, 2016 1:15 pm

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PostSubject: Re: My first time ME RPing...Don't rape me with your elitist insults, nerds. App.   Thu Jul 14, 2016 1:19 pm

nice mem br0, so funni!!!!! XDDDDDDDDD

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