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PostSubject: Promoted Extremist's Quarian Application   Thu Jun 02, 2016 1:51 pm

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Steam Name: Promoted Extremist

Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:53900143

Steam Profile Link:http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198068066014/

Rp Experience: I have been role-playing for over 8 years I first started in World of Warcraft when I was 8 and then I moved onto GMOD and I played on Mobius when I was like 10, then I went back to World of Warcraft and then onto Jedi Academy RP, all of which was serious role-play. Shortly after I returned to GMOD where I was on and off on different servers. Most of my RP experience comes from both World of Warcraft and Garry's Mod

Tell me a cool Mass Effect Fact: The Quarians created the Geth Race.

Character Name: Kar' "Haj" Lebano

Age: 25

What can your character do for our ship? (Muscle, Maintenance, Triggerman, Comedic Act, etc.): Muscle and Engineering.

Character Equipment: Avenger Assault Rifle, and Light Quarian Male Colossus Armor with a Utility Belt.

Moral Alignment: Neutral and Neutral.

Strengths: Teamwork, Communication, Loyal, Calm, Friendly, Careful, and Survives hardship with grace and humor.

Weaknesses: Has a weak Immune System (like all the others obviously), could sometimes be a little annoying but keeps that too himself, scared in stressful situations, Ruthlessly protective of loved ones, Unable to overcome guilt, and at sometimes could be Stubborn.

Character Backstory a.k.a. how or why are you here (One paragraph minimum, be creative!): Kar' Lebano is a 25 year old Quarian male who was born on March 20th 2158. He was born on a rather large Quarian Cargo Ship. Kar's parents both worked on the ship 24/7. His father was a fierce helmsman and his mother worked as one of the ship's engineers. Kar himself like many other Quarian children from birth was a give the regular treatment. He was home schooled from inside a glass room that kept him away from the hazardous outside world until he was eight. At the age of eight, Kar' was finally old/big enough to wear his first environment suit. He was given whatever was available in the Quarian's Ship. In a large case was a Red and Black Suit that he would wear around on the ship daily. Kar' was then placed into a education facility like other Quarian Children. He was taken to where he joined other young Quarian Children still in Standard Education. Mainly learning how to become engineers for the the Quarian fleet. Kar' completed his engineer education.

At Kars' age of sixteen Kar's parents had decided it was time for himself to go onto his own pilgrimage (Journey). A regular tradition for his race. While he waited for a nearby Turian trading ship he wondered and wondered what he wanted to do with his life and when the Turian trading ship picked him up he knew what he had to do, he moved to the Citadel. There Kar' rented a really small ship so he could get around too where he wanted to go. With hopes of delivering data to the fleet that would be worthy of his return and so because he could see his father and mother again. His luck ran out and with nothing worthy of returning to the Migrant fleet and money running scarce Kar'. (By this point we're in the part of the story where he is about eighteen years old.)

He decided to join the marines and fight/work for them as a Engineer and a Communications Officer. But after six years of it. He had decided to quit while he still had the chance. But he left with something more then himself. He left with Teamwork and Communication and Engineering just like he had learned on his old colony ship, so he had many options on what he wanted to do in his life for now on, he could either become a Merk (Mercenary) and discover the universe or stay in a world and work as a Trader because of his Communication Skills and being helpful, could know where to go and possibly help someone out on where to go or he could be a engineer like he was destined to be and start working for a criminal organization so he could get some credits, but he didn't want to have the law on his ass so he decided not to go into the criminal business.

After a few more years had past and talked to his mother and father a little bit more he decided what he wanted too do in his life he had searched groups that were in need of a Engineer and hopefully getting in Kar' himself being experienced but out of a job found himself on in a city where he waited for a man who asked him what he did for a living, he talked to the man. Not going into too much detail in case the figure was a undercover Police Officer. He eventually told him about a cargo ship needing people to help defend it and man it. He decided to sign himself up for the job as a engineer on the ship the man was talking about and this is where he begins his story as a engineer on a ship at the age of 25.

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Last edited by Promoted Extremist on Fri Jun 03, 2016 8:39 pm; edited 9 times in total (Reason for editing : Fixed everything and added more Jeep Stuff. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°))
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PostSubject: Re: Promoted Extremist's Quarian Application   Thu Jun 02, 2016 6:12 pm

Needs a bit of rewording. Check it over for me, improve where you can.

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PostSubject: Re: Promoted Extremist's Quarian Application   Thu Jun 02, 2016 11:46 pm

http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Quarian
http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Timeline


You should probably read through those, as there's some big lore inconsistencies here. Namely, the morning war (aka geth war) was 300 years ago in the timeline, and your character seems to have not bothered with the pilgrimage that quarians from the migrant fleet go through. I'd also like to see more added to the characters weaknesses, as the bad immune system is inherent to all quarians and isn't really specific to this character. Oh and out of curiosity, why did you pick a quarian for the character's species?




p.s. application needs more jeep stuff.
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PostSubject: Re: Promoted Extremist's Quarian Application   Fri Jun 03, 2016 12:02 am

Adding more Jeep Stuff and I wanted to play as a Quarian because I want that to be my first character in a Mass Effect RP server because I have never played a Mass Effect RP server before, so it's all in good fun really.
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PostSubject: Re: Promoted Extremist's Quarian Application   Fri Jun 03, 2016 11:37 pm

A bit rigid, but welcome aboard.

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