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PostSubject: Koren's Application   Tue May 17, 2016 3:46 pm

Steam Name:Koren
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:62365673
Steam Profile Link:http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198084997074
Rp Experience: 314 hours on gmod most of it on Rp. Admin on several servers.
Tell me a cool Mass Effect Fact: Instead, across all three games there are other romances going on depending on certain choices; Tali and Garrus will hook up if you're not romancing either of them, Normandy engineers Ken and Gabby do the same, and in the Citadel DLC if Ashley or Vega aren't your other halves, they'll find happiness in each other too.
Character Name: Tom Koren
Age:23
What can your character do for our ship? (Muscle, Maintenance, Triggerman, Comedic Act, etc.): Protection
Character Equipment: Mattock
Moral Alignment: Neutral; Neutral
  • Strengths:
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  • Problematic situations, teamwork.

  • Weaknesses:

  • Doesnt had a lot of human contact, Death of close people.

  • Character Backstory:
    (newborn) 2160 CE- Tom Koren  is born on a cargo spaceship with a tripulation of 2000 people aboard, the N0mad, there he had all his family.

    (7 months old) 2160 CE- Seven months later after his birth, The N0mad is attacked by space pirates. While the attack was happening, their parents found a escape pod which only one person could fit in there. So they decided that the life of their baby was more important than their. They sent him alone wishing the best luck. His mother pressed the button and the baby traveled around the galaxy connected to a machine able to keep him alive by providing him the necessary stuff to live for a week at least.

    Three days after he was sent to the space, he is found by a Quarian, who survived the Geth War after aboarding the Migrant Fleet and moving away from Rannoch, the homeworld. This Quarian was alone in a little spaceship capable to support three people as much. He wasn't too young and neither too old, but he was still on his pilgrimage trying to find any kind of unknown artifact to the Quarian Flotilla. So he decides to rescue the human baby and get to Omega, where he takes care of the Tom and keeping him hidden from the dangerous threats around Omega.

    (17 years old) 2177 CE- As Omega was surrounded by criminals, Tom grew up watching bad references. The first time he was going to steal, he didnt had a great plan or even much strenght, but, he was hungry and he was only thinking on getting some food. So he went to the market area of Omega and found a place that was easy to steal. There, he saw a server plate with some recently warmed up food with a pretty good smell.happening behind the counter. No one was looking at him, so then he opened it and inside the cash registrer there were a lot of credits, Tom ran to not be seen but the owner of the store shouted:
    - Give me back those credits, boy! - as the man was aiming the teenager with a Predator.
    - Sorry!- he shouted feeling bad for the poor owner while he was running in the market while the owner was shooting, the owner failed every shot and killed 10 persons. The guards arrested the owner of the shop. When everything was more calmed Tom did go and Tom picked up his Mattock and went back to his home.

    (22 years old) 2182 CE- He found information about a ship, the Geisha. There were 50 people on the ship and he know that stealing guns from they wont be easy. He infiltrated on the ship, and then he was caught, his only failure on his all history of crimes.
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    PostSubject: Re: Koren's Application   Wed May 18, 2016 12:46 am

    There's a few lore errors in this- mainly, the geth war was about 300 years ago from the server's timeline.

    http://masseffect.wikia.com/wiki/Timeline

    It's 2183 on the server, to give you a reference point.


    Also, it looks like your character is very combat oriented. This is okay, but you may get more enjoyment out of the roleplay if you give him some skills or interests that aren't somehow related to combat/weapons.


    Hope it helps and best of luck on getting it accepted! Very Happy
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    PostSubject: Re: Koren's Application   Mon Jun 06, 2016 7:59 pm

    Moved to pending.

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